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You walked with a small bounce in your step. Your best friend of six years, Oliver Kirkland, had invited you over to bake cupcakes with him. You loved baking with him, mostly because you loved to be around him. You had grown quite smitten with the enthusiastic Brit, and you were planning to tell him your feelings today.

When you reached Oliver’s house, you quickly ran your fingers through your (h/l)(h/c) hair and knocked on the front door. You had only waited about two seconds before the door flew open and you were enveloped in a hug.

“________! I’m so glad you could make it! Come in, I’ve already gotten everything out.” Oliver said. You felt your face heat up as he grabbed your hand and dragged you to the kitchen.

When you and Oliver reached the kitchen, you saw that the counters were clean. None of the baking supplies were out. You turned towards Oliver. “I thought you said you had gotten everything out?”

“I did silly! We’re going to do something a little different today.” He said guiding you into the dining room. That’s when you noticed that you were still holding his hand. Your felt your face get hot and red again, and Oliver noticed this time. “_______? Are you feeling okay?” You nodded after letting go of him and realizing how stupid you must have looked.

You looked at the dining table, which had two plates, and the red velvet cupcakes you and Oliver made the day before. He took a cupcake from the display he set up and held it out to you. “I thought that today we should just take a break and enjoy the things we made. Ladies first poppet.” You took the beautifully decorated cupcake and sat down at the table.

“This looks delicious! Thanks Ollie!” you said before sinking your teeth into the cake. Oliver followed suit.

~Timeskip~

It had taken about thirty minutes for you and Oliver to finish off the cupcakes. He let out a puff and smiled. “Those were the best cupcakes I’ve ever eaten. We should open our own bakery, what do you think love?”

You smiled back and nodded. Then you suddenly remembered your initial mission. The one thing you’ve wanted to say for a while. You looked down into your lap. “Hey, Oliver? I have something to tell you.” You glanced back up to see his beautiful blue eyes pierce your (e/c) ones. He held up his hand.

“May I go first poppet? I also have something to say.” he said putting his hand down. You nodded for him to continue speaking. “It’s just, you have a bit of frosting on your lip there.” You tried to wipe away whatever was on your face, but you couldn’t find the frosting. “No, a little bit to the left. A little more. No wait, now you went too far.” Oliver finally gave up and said, “You know what, lean over here and I’ll get it for you.”

You did as instructed. But instead of feeling a napkin or cloth on your lips, you felt something soft and warm. It only took a couple seconds for you to register what was going on.

Oliver was kissing you.

Your heart fluttered in your chest as you returned the favor. When you finally broke apart, you noticed he had a bit of frosting on the left corner of his lower lip, which he licked away. Now that you knew the location of the frosting, you did the same.

“You want to know something love?” Oliver asked, putting his arms around your waist. You nodded and laced your arms around his neck.

“In my opinion, red velvet tastes much better on you.”

~FIN~
A letter to Reader-chan,
First of all, when I see 2p Hetalia, I don’t see murderous, bloodthirsty killers and psychopaths. I see the 1p countries with different looks and a completely opposite personality. The 2p characters in my stories will NOT kill unless absolutely necessary (i.e. to protect you, dear Reader-chan). So if you want to read a yandere 2p story, don’t leave hate on my story, don’t read it and just go somewhere else. Thank you.
~Writer-chan

Actual Description:
What can I say? I was eating a red velvet cupcake and POOF! One-shot idea of bossness. I hope you enjoyed! Feedback is much appreciated! Oh, and if you don’t like red velvet, just pretend you do for the sake of the story, please. Suggestive last line is suggestive. :dummy: Okay then, bye! :iconlazywaveplz:

Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya
You belong to the lovely Oliver Kirkland
I belong to no one! :iconepicstareplz:
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:iconcyndertenkaicourage:
CynderTenkaiCourage Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student Artist
'I prefere if they wern't labeled merderous killer phsycopaths'
I agree! Nuf said Brah!
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
Wonder was makes 'em red~
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
red velvet is chocolate with red food coloring •w•
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
I was implying Oliver using blood in his cuppycakes
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
oh. O-O

well, not this time ^_^
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ThatRoamingAngel Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Student Artist
OMG
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RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
O£O)!Cupcake Love Fallen Angel RQ Avatar Fallen Angel RQ Avatar 
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MorticianXD Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
At first I thought he said much better than you and I was like well fudge you to and then I read it again and was like ohhhhh
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Deidara-Brat Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dang.
Oliver is smooth as Frick.
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AwesomeMaple Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!~
You just made me hungry...
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shadowangel33 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Artist
red velvet is my favorite ^////////^ now i'm hungry 
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emmalynncat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconovariesplz:
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BrokenCupcakes Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O^O so kawaii..
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Maple-Mochi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
ARE YOU MY LONG LOST SISTER.


N-nevermind.


I totally agree with you! And.. just to be honest I don't like them getting written as a rapist.. It totally bothers me.


And fuck (oh hey Oliver) I love red velvet! Especially Red velvet cupcake! Er meh gerd. :iconderpplz:
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
dude its the best thing ever...
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Maple-Mochi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Mhm, I also like Strawberry Shortcake ;w;
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ooooh thats good too!
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Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student General Artist
I much prefer it when they aren't murderous killing psychopaths :D

Dat suggestive ending line XD
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InsaneAngel-101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Dat suggestive ending line. I respect your opinion on 2ps and I can agree on some points, I'm a bit double sided and I do like both the psycho and the sweet sides. Anyway, besides that, THIS WAS ADORABLE!
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you!
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InsaneAngel-101 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student General Artist
You're very welcome!
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AllAboardTheSSDerp Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree with you about the 2p!s with the exception of possible exceptions of 2p! America and 2p! Italy, maybe and even then it's kind of if-y. For those two I think I could see them killing to blow off steam if they're super angry but regretting it later . . . other than that I completely agree with you though! By the way this was a super cute one-shot. Keep up the good work!
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I will thank you! Love your username by the way.
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AllAboardTheSSDerp Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you chica! I've been getting a lot of messages like that!
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HYBRiD-eMPReSS Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally agree with you about the 2P!s. I've actually always kinda seen 2P!America as a yandere but other than that I really don't understand why everyone makes them so violent and crap >.> Anyways, fantastic job!
~Rose
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much!
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HYBRiD-eMPReSS Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ^^
~Rose
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So... Fluffy... :dummy: FINALLY! It took me FOREVER to find a piece like this! :iconfinallyplz:
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shippotannya Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
I got spit on my iPad because of that icon
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:icontissueplz: Here you go. Spit is nasty.
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shippotannya Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Thanks...
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome! :dummy:
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anime-otaku28 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LERV this fanfic!!! :iconyay2penglandplz:

I CAN'T STOP laughing!! :iconepicstareplz::iconepicstareplz::iconepicstareplz:
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HeartRogue Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
:iconepicstareplz:
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HeartRogue Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
When I saw the last icon you used in the description, I did the PPPPT kinda laugh and sprayed my laptop..
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Indeed. I love that icon!
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HeartRogue Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
Yep... XD Aaah got shpit on mah lappytop...
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flowerpower71 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013

This was so cute! >w<

 

Pfft yes very suggestive last line XD

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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
YAY!!!
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cantthinkofusername1 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this teddy bear Ollie!!! ...I did, however, get a little scared when I read the title.
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yesh! I love teddy bear Ollie too. I don't like the 2p's as murderers. It's not fair.
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minicat444 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
I second that.
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cantthinkofusername1 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It creates interesting character relationships, though...
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Indeed
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DlAMONDS Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
When I saw the title, then my username. I squeed.
Then I read this.
And then I squeed some more.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
+Faved!
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconderpplz: I'm so happy you liked it!
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DlAMONDS Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:icontransparentplz::icondiscoballplz:
:iconderpplz::iconderpplz::iconderpplz:
:icontransparentplz::icondancingmarioplz:
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shippotannya Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Nice;D
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omfg
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